Legs are to skinny and the most important part she a girl she has to look like a girl, some thigs need to be fixed to but the frame position is original So anyway take these advices if you want, good luck
While i realize i'm usually the one to throw that comment around that whatever bad Naruto head paste is contributed, this guy is actually trying to improve his spriting skills, so a comment like that does not help him. Say why they're bad, tell him what he could improve.
the most important part she a girl she has to look like a girl
^that's pretty much the only thing i see wrong with it, her face is too ugh, don't know how to describe this this, it's far too manly. Make her face more feminine. Every normal man must be tempted at times to spit on his hands, hoist the black flag, and begin to slit throats.