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| Nemesis_LT | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 11:54 PM | Message # 1 |
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| I have decided (today) to start creating my own mugen sprites. Tell me if what I'm doing so far looks good (only 2 images so far  )
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Open it in new tab/window as it is transparent and you can't see his weapon.
Merry Christmas, my friends!
Message edited by Nemesis_LT - Sunday, 2011-12-18, 11:54 PM |
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| Gozar | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 1:26 AM | Message # 2 |
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| It's not bad. 
Dora, Dora, Dora, the explorer! >:3
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| Nemesis_LT | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 4:29 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Good to hear that .
Merry Christmas, my friends!
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| KIX | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 4:54 PM | Message # 4 |
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http://neuropod.net/imagehost/uploads/c51c674fa9ef4160d2c1ea14a9859c4f.gif <---- 5%
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| NatsuDragneel | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 5:01 PM | Message # 5 |
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| oh cmon now stop using that shitty site for this "pic conversation" btw it looks alright
Batman+Natsu : level facepalm.
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| Mugen_Boy | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 7:35 PM | Message # 6 |
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| the stance looks pretty weird, instead of going front and back that much, why dont you reduce the pixels he moves front?
With little practice, I think you are good to go as a spriter
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| MGSSJ2 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 10:21 PM | Message # 7 |
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| The shading looks bad, try referencing from other sprites.
The colours you used look bad IMO, too much saturation.
The stance is poorly animated, needs more frames and more fluency.
Face needs more details.
Is that hair? Because if it is it looks way too square.
And general outline looks way too stiff.
3/10, you must (and can) get better
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| Nemesis_LT | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 11:48 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Quote (MGSSJ2) Is that hair
No, it must be a medieval peasant hat .
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Quote (MGSSJ2) Face needs more details
He's a poor peasant. No one cares about his face .
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Weapon, hat and shirt are from this pic.
Merry Christmas, my friends!
Message edited by Nemesis_LT - Monday, 2011-12-19, 11:49 PM |
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| jintaro | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-20, 2:33 AM | Message # 9 |
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| this sprite is not even novice it looks more like a icon then a sprite the shading sucks the body sucks everything is too small you must believe you are a spriter. your animation is decent for a first try continue this could be interesting there's not that many spriters/coders like me,mg or cliff
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| Nemesis_LT | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-20, 4:17 PM | Message # 10 |
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|  Is it a little better now?
Merry Christmas, my friends!
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| Rub | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-20, 5:22 PM | Message # 11 |
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| yea better
RP-Sasuke-R - 100%
RNaruto-Rub(full modes) - 79%
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| Mugen_Boy | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-20, 5:47 PM | Message # 12 |
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| Lot better but still could improve
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| Nemesis_LT | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-20, 6:15 PM | Message # 13 |
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| And he will be improved.
Merry Christmas, my friends!
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