Quote (JohnMega)
you could do a much better sprite if you took some time, your shading needs to improve a lot
http://neuropod.net/imagehost/uploads/732b3b57254eb3911ad6907c1b1c1b38.PNG
here's what i did with your outline, i changed the initial outline(not the one from this thread) a tiny bit and then shaded it properly, shading is a tricky thing to do but eventually you'll get there
iamma know what to fix gotta fix it now